Moment in Time Writing Term 2 2017
WALT write "a moment in time" piece of writing.
Specific goals I can use language that is suitable to the topic, audience and purpose. (Structure & Language)
My reflection on this writing:
I have worked towards achieving my goals by:
- Writing about the senses like what I saw, heard, felt at the scene.
- Made it interesting for my reader.
I can see:
I can hear:
I can smell:
I can feel:
I can taste:
One day I was strolling along the beach when I heard something...
I can see big boulders with cracks getting bigger and bigger until they are Ginormous. I am seeing Gooey slimy yolk starting to appear in different colors. Cracks are appearing under the egg is well.
I can hear waves cracking by the hillside, boulders popping out stones as I walk closer. Seagulls are squawking over the beach.I can hear the wind as it blows across my face.
I can smell the salty seaweed decaying on the ground and the fresh and breezy air. I can also smell of fish in the water. Yuk!
I can feel the hard rock starting to crack and the sand beneath, my feet it's really hot.I can feel the slimy gross seaweed under my feet, it is so gross.
I can taste specks of sand in my mouth.I can also taste salty water hanging in the air, grains of sand and salty air fill my mouth with an weird and unusual taste
Then suddenly it cracks and I see an unusual animal I don't know what it is but it has pointy ears and a long tail I wonder what it is...